Prelim Task Final Edited Video
(Self evaluation is included in my prezi)
Feedback from others
Once we had completed our prelim video, we showed our final clip to everyone else in the class and we watched others. We gave feedback which included our opinions on the video we added comments and rated certain things out of ten like the storyline, shots and sound used. We then received these comments from the class telling us what went well and what we should have improved on. This will help in the future as I know what I need to focus on in other tasks.
The first thing our audience gave feedback on was 'was the genre evident' which scored our highest individual score which was a 10/10 but as an average was an 8/10.
Our second feedback question was 'Did they include all shots including dialogue, match on action and tracking?' which we got an overall score average of 8/10. I believe this score was relatively high because we added a high angle tracking shot, over the shoulder shot and the 180 degree shot which was needed in our video. To make this score higher we should have added more close up shots. Comments along with this question included 'I liked the running shot best' and 'the high angle shot was good' these positive comments show how we followed the shots instructions.
The third question was 'how did camera, editing, sound and Mis-en-scene work together? The comments for the music and sound we used include 'the music was good as it fitted the emotions of the character well' and 'good choice of music'. This was good feedback as we really thought about what songs to use from the start. As a score, we got the highest of 8 and got an average of 7/10, this was our lowest score which suggests we should have worked more on editing. We didn't receive many comments for Mis-en-scene but one person said 'the setting was suitable as classrooms were used like in many other musicals.' this shows we used suitable settings and locations.
The last question was 'Script and story' which we got an average of 7/10 for, I think we got marked down for this due our script because we didn't include much dialogue and we got positive comments about our storyline such as 'good clear story to follow'.
As well as these positive comments we also received negative comments which were really useful to hear so we don't make the same mistakes again in the future. A frequent comment which would allow us to improve was 'too much walking' and 'tracking shot was too long' now that I know this I will try to keep durations shorter next time so we no longer have this issue.